Than vs. Then

Than is used to show comparisons: John is taller than I am.

Then is used to show passage of time: I did this, then I did that. 

Quick Guide to Capitalization Rules

Help with Capitalization

Is it National Park or national park?
Is it Capital Building or capital building or Capital building?

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Good Business W riting

Good business writing meets the 3-C's requirement:

- Clarity: Is the document easy to follow and understand?
- Conciseness: Does the document use the minimum number of words and no more?
- Correctness: Are grammar, punctuation, sentences and all facts accurate?

Links to great writing resources

The Ultimate Guide to Better Business Writing: 100 Tips, Tools, and Resources--http://onlinedegreeprograms.org/blog/2009/the-ultimate-guide-to-better-business-writing-100-tips-tools-and-resources/

Latin abbreviations, etc., etc., and so forth

etc. = and so forth "et cetera"
et al. = and other people "et alii"
i.e. = that is "id est"
e.g. = for example "exempli gratia"
ibid. = in the same place "ibidem"
op. cit. = in the work cited "opere citato"

Latin abbreviations are italicized and use periods as shown. If they are in the middle of a sentence, they have a comma before and after, e.g., this sentence.

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This and That

This identifies an object nearby:
- This book is boring.


That identifies an object farther away:
- I think I will read that book now.

"Staff is" vs. "Staff are"

Collective nouns are words that appear singular, but represent a group, such as flock, staff, class, committee, and jury.

If the group acts as a single unit, or if the idea of oneness is key, use a singular verb:
- The jury has reached a verdict.
- A couple of birds has built a nest in the eaves of my house.
- My staff is preparing the report to the board.

If members of the group act separately or if the word refers to individuals within the group, use the plural verb:
- A group of researchers from Europe are coming to the conference.
- A couple of latecomers are not seated.
- My staff are consistently late for work.


What about these?
- Human rights is a sensitive issue.
- Human rights are often ignored.

Nouns that end in “-ics” take a singular verb if they refer to a body of knowledge; a plural verb, if they refer to particular activities:
- Statistics is a boring subject for many students.
- Statistics are often interpreted for the benefit of the speaker.

Aide vs. Aid

Are you an aid or an aide to your boss?

Aid can be used as a noun meaning a form of help or a verb meaning to help.

- We offer aid to people affected by disaster.
- We aid those affected by disaster.

Aide is a noun and means an assistant.

- John Taylor is the senator's aide.
- You are an aide to your boss.

That or Which?

That = introduces essential information: “The mystery book that is on the third shelf is mine” means that there is more than one mystery book and mine is the one on the third shelf.

Which = introduces nonessential information: “The mystery book, which is on the third shelf, is mine” means that there is only one mystery book, it is on the third shelf, and it is mine.

E-mail Etiquette

Do
• Be concise and specific
• Use proper spelling, grammar and punctuation
• Proofread
• Keep language gender neutral
• Use a salutation and signature
Don’t
• Use text abbreviations and emoticons
• Send confidential information
• Use all CAPITALS
• Flame
• Use fancy formatting

Use the Right Word: Amount vs. Number

Amount vs. Number

Amount = non-discrete quantities -- “the amount of water in the ocean”

Number = discrete quantities -- “the number of ounces in the cup”

Use the Right Word: Person vs. People

Person is singular: There is a strange person loitering in front of my house.
People is plural: There are three strange people loitering in front of my house.

E-mail Dos and Don'ts

Do
• Be concise and specific
• Use proper spelling, grammar and punctuation
• Proofread
• Keep language gender neutral
• Use a salutation and signature
Don’t
• Use text abbreviations and emoticons
• Send confidential information
• Use all CAPITALS
• Flame
• Use fancy formatting

Use the Right Word: Affect or Effect?

Affect = to influence something (verb) -- “The movie didn’t affect me at all.”
Effect = result or outcome (noun) -- “The effect of not wearing a seatbelt can be bad.”
Effect = to bring about or cause (verb) -- “The doctor tried to effect a change in my diet.”

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What's the difference between "Among" and "Between"?

Among = Compared to many -- “The cake was shared among the 12 students.”
Between = Compared to two -- “The cake was shared between the two students.”

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Why care about grammar and punctuation in e-mail? Y cnt we jst ttfn and lol n eml?

Taking time to use correct grammar and punctuation is good business. It shows respect for the reader, reflects well on your professionalism, and, most importantly, contributes to understanding.

Grammar and punctuation mistakes and text messaging abbreviations open the door to misinterpretation -- and readers will always interpret something to their advantage, not yours.

What about those oh-so-cute smilies and emoticons? What's wrong with ;-)? Nothing -- if you want to come across like a 14-year-old. If you want to look like a professional, limit the smilies and emoticons to non-business e-mails to your BFF.

Hope vs. Hopefully

Hopefully, the check is in the mail.
vs.
I hope the check is in the mail.

In this example, the use of "hopefully" is incorrect. A word that ends in -ly is an adverb and modifies a verb. "Hopefully" cannot modify "is."

If you can substitute "I hope" for "hopefully," you shouldn't use "hopefully."

Confused? Just delete "hopefully" and revise the sentence.

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